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Kid x Reader
Asymmetrical


You settled into bed, unaware of the danger lurking nearby. You were just about to turn off the lights when Kid jumped through the door, looking positively disgusted.
"They're all asymmetrical." He gasped, diving into your arms. You jumped.
"Kid. Who?" You asked, and he looked up at you, then a spot on your neck. You looked down- or tried to.
"All of them-- and now even you!" He shouted, and you sighed.
"What's wrong?" You asked, and he pointed to a red spot on your neck.
"Oh, yeah. I burned myself with my hair straightener." You said, laughing softly. He grimaced.
"It throws off your symmetry, I think I can fix it though." He said, and you immediately backed away.
"I'm not letting you burn me with my straightener again." You said, and Kid sighed.
"Well, there's three ways. The first two are painful, the third isn't." He said, and you sighed.
"Just- the third. The third one that apparently isn't painful." You said, expecting him to dive for your makeup kit. Instead, he dove forward, and latched his mouth onto the spot that was perfectly symmetrical to your burn. You yelped, and blushed. Unfortunately for you, that was a very sensitive spot.
"K-K-K-Kid!" You gasped out, and he pulled away, obviously annoyed.
"Yes, _______?" He asked, and you stuttered for a few seconds, blushing.
"That's just a really sensitive spot..." You mumbled, as Kid sighed.
"Say again?" He asked, and you heaved a heavy sigh.
"That's a really sensitive spot, ok?" You said, loudly. He blushed at first, then smirked, leaning forward and pinning you to the oh-so convenient wall behind you,  licking the burned spot. You squirmed, and held back a mewl. Kid leaned forward more, and began sucking on the burned spot. You couldn't help it.
"H-hhaa..." You breathed out shakily. Kid smirked again, then switched to the other side. He nibbled it experimentally.
"Mm- ahhhh..." You moaned quietly, almost inaudibly. Kid smiled, before mashing his lips onto yours roughly. He held your wrists down by your side, and was straddling you You could see no escape... Although... Maybe you didn't want to escape. Here was Kid with his tongue half way down your throat. There weren't fireworks going off in your stomach, there were cannons.
And you kind of liked being overpowered like this. He flicked his tongue against your lips, ordering entrance. And who were you to refuse an order? His tongue pressed against yours, before exploring it's new territory. You moaned softly when his tongue rubbed against yours sensually. He smirked into the kiss, before tilting his head so he could kiss you at a better angle. You felt his tongue push against your aggressively. You responded, and surprisingly, you won dominance. You pushed your way into his cavern, and explored it. He tasted so good. You couldn't quite tell what it was he tasted like though. He growled slightly when your teeth clashed, and the accursed need for air drew the two of you apart. Your breath came out in gasps, and Kid caught your eye before he began attacking your neck again, nipping licking and sucking his way down to your collar bone, where he but down hard, leaving a love bite. He gave it a quick lick, then treated the other side of your neck to the same treatment, making sure to leave a perfectly symmetrical mark. He pulled away, satisfied with his work.
"______..." He said, his voice husky.
"Kid, I-"
"Love you." He finished,"Yeah, I love you too."
You felt the mark on your neck, before getting up, and shutting off the light. You climbed back into your bed, and Kid wrapped his arms around you. You smiled, thinking about the perfectly symmetrical marks. Soul was gonna get a kick out of that...
KID'S SO OOC! IM SO SORRY Dx
I don't own Soul Eater.
You (c) :icondeaththekidplz:
Edit: If this makes it to 200 favorites, I'll write up a part two :)
Edit: 204 faves! Thanks guys, part two is on the way!
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:iconkawaiininjaowo:
KawaiiNinjaOwO Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
I don't care is he ooc in these fanfics
its a great fanfic m8
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student General Artist
I'm blushing like a freaking idiot right now... SO DETAILED! O//////O
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:iconashackerman:
ashackerman Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
As a person with Symmetrical OCD as well, that burn would bother me so much ;-;
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHY CAN'T KIDDO BE REAL!!! Rage Waaaah! 
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:iconlightpelt122002:
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  New Deviant
IKR I WISH HE WAS REAL Waaaah! 
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Angel: I make myself perfectly symmetrical every f**king day, then remember, "Oh yeah, Kiddo..."
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:iconlightpelt122002:
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant
Exactly I put on a fully symmetrical outfit and just started reading these so as to drown out that fact that he wasn't real :(
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Angel: Reality sucks, don't it?
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:iconlightpelt122002:
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant
YUP I wish I could just jump into the anime and live there and just be that random person like....Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5]"ER MER GERD ITS KIIIIIIIIIIDDDDDD" and I will just be perfectly symmetrical just cause :3
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Angel: Yeah, I actually wish I had a portal to anime like Inuyasha, ya know?

Miroku: You actually have one.

Angel: SHUT THE F**K UP, YOU PERVY MONK!!!
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:iconlightpelt122002:
Lightpelt122002 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  New Deviant
YAY SOMEONE ELSE KNOWS THAT ANIME BESIDES MEEEEEEEE XD inuyasha gif inuyasha gif kagome 
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:iconash1102:
Ash1102 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
love this so much it's not even funny!!!!
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:iconkatykraft:
KatyKraft Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Student Filmographer
Y/N: Soul Guess Who made this Mark???
Soul: Who? *not interested face*
Y/N: Kid....
Soul: O.O *table flips* NU....


        (Souls like my brother XD) Bravo u did a excellent job though!!!!Sunset Shimmer EqG (clapping) plz Sunset Shimmer EqG (clapping) plz 
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:iconzombiedswim:
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
That is brilliant.
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:iconaircakes:
Aircakes Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Student Writer
He's not that ooc. Just a little... Cooler
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:iconbreezylemonway:
breezylemonway Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Frankly... I wanna see Soul's reaction.
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:iconaircakes:
Aircakes Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Student Writer
I feel like that would be hysterical
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:iconbreezylemonway:
breezylemonway Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah.
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:iconanimecrush7:
animecrush7 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
Part 2 please!
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:iconkatthephoenix:
Katthephoenix Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Oh my.......... 
Rose blush Kaori Fujimiya (Total Blush) [V1] Onodera Blushing Icon 
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:icongreen-eyed-dreamer97:
This is so PERFECT!!!! \>.</ Praying for a part two with Soul's reaction!!!
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:iconkatmagnet:
KatMagnet Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student Writer
I wanna see Soul freak out! XD
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:icondoge-chan:
Doge-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I felt weird just reading this...
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:iconweharry:
weharry Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Moreeeee -turns into a zombie- Relaxed 
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:iconbellaraven219:
BellaRaven219 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG I love the last part "Soul was gonna get a kick out of that..." XD
X3
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:icongothfoxgirl:
Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
-massive cherry red blush- -out cold-
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:iconmmhinman:
MMHinman Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHH MOTHER OF GOD THIS IS JUST Excited Blush Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] Yato (Blush) [V1] Taiga Aisaka (Melt) [V1]  
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AndrogynousGirl Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG! So beautiful~ Nosebleed 
Run Cry I-I'm not crying! *sniffle* ...  I WANT YOU KID!!! 
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:iconcathykai10:
CathyKai10 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Omg that picture though XD
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:iconandrogynousgirl:
AndrogynousGirl Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol ye XD
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:iconanniebananaberry:
anniebananaberry Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
I LAUGHED SO HARD AND I'M NOT EVEN SURE WHY
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:iconsweet-sackgirl:
Sweet-Sackgirl Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Artist
well... thts hot Big Fool Emoji-15 (Pervy Blush) [V2] Shouko-Blush (Baka to test) 
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:icontherpfreak:
TheRPFreak Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This was amazing. Such and amazing writer
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:iconmallory-tan:
mallory-tan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
so poetic....
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:iconalexisanderen:
ALEXISANDEren Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
SO MUCH SYMMETRY ITS AMAZING
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
OH MY SYMMETRY!!!!!!! IT IS SO AMAZING!!!!
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:iconatreiyuphantomhive:
AtreiyuPhantomhive Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Professional Writer
WTFHOLYSYMMETRYWHATJUSTHAPPENED?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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:iconkirahiscool:
KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
OMHGF%E Q^BWMCA 

IM CRYING

IM SO ALONE


KIDDDDD
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ZANE-GAY-BOY Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student General Artist
the cereey thing is to day i fell of mty bike and got a small red mark on my neak...........0.0 my door i fogot to lock it Death the Kid Chibi 
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:iconcathykai10:
CathyKai10 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Haha :D
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:iconelfen-lied-lover-357:
Elfen-Lied-Lover-357 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Chinatsu Yoshikawa (Shy Fangirling) [V1] 
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Hear that? That's the sound of me crying because I can't have his sexy ass.
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:icondoge-chan:
Doge-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Racing Girl Emoji (Hnngg) [V2] Racing Girl Emoji (Nose Bleed) [V3] 

Racing Girl Emoji (My life) [V4]
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Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Some of the comments scare me 0-o
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:icondoge-chan:
Doge-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My comment scares me.
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:iconaloistrancyfangirl:
AloisTrancyfangirl Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student
the feels   the fangirling....handsome Kyungsoo  is real...ROTG.13 ...Jibril Fangirling Icon 
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:iconpika1dragon:
pika1dragon Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
I have an ocd to make things perfect but not like kid hes got it bad
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:iconfoxstarkiss:
FOXSTARkiss Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Artist
Anime: O////O
Me: * creepily appears * watcha rea- DEATH THE KID AND ANIME SITING I-
Anime: ANIME PUNCH * punches me *
Me: * creepily vanishes *
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xKirameku-Lunaix Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god I felt hot just reading this. XD
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7h3g4m3rg1rL Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AGREEMENT
OMG
Perverted Nose Bleed 
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