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Freak
______ sighed.
Another long day. Another painful day. Someone had written the word 'freak' on the mirror in her locker. She had ignored it, but people saw it and laughed. She was shoved into the lockers about five times today. People pushed her books out if her hands six times today, and she was called 'Freak' and 'Strange' countless times. She was a nice girl, but for some reason people liked picking on her.
"________!" She heard a voice call out, as she was walking home to her abusive parents. She didn't want to go home, but she didn't want to be late either, and besides, being called freak, and emo would be better than going home to pain, right?
"_______!" The voice called again, and she turned.

"What?" You asked, a bit annoyed at the blonde running toward you.
"Sorry. About zhe mirror zhing. My older brother did it, Gilbert,
and I vanted to say sorry." The guy you recognized as Ludwig said, and you scoffed.
"Really, how much are your friends paying you to talk to me, and where are they hiding?" You asked. This had been done to you many times.
"V-vhat?" He asked, and you sighed.
"Don't play dumb. I asked you a damn question." You said, and he looked confused. Honestly confused.
"I don't get it." He said, and you softened a bit.
"What I mean is; people's friends pay them to talk to me. Because to them, I'm just some stupid freak... Sorry for assuming." You said, and Ludwig nodded.
"Vell, I-I have to go." He said, and you started walking away, only to see some of Ludwig's friends, Feliciano and Kiku walk out of the bushes. Lying bastard. You ran the rest of the way home.

()()()

"Augh!" You cried out as the knife your mother held carved a single word into your arm.
'Freak'

()()()

The next day, in the 100 degree weather, you wore a sweatshirt. People laughed at you, but you brushed them off. You sighed, not hearing Ludwig approach.
"_______." He said, and you turned to see him.
"Ludwig."
"You should take off the sweatshirt." He said, and you sighed.
"You should stay away from me." You retorted. Ludwig rolled his eyes, taking a seat next to you.
"If you do not take off zhe sweatshirt, I vill take zhe damn thing off of you." He growled, and you sighed.
"Only my friends can tell me to do stuff like that, Ludwig." You said and Ludwig chuckled.
"Zhen ve are friends." He said, and you rolled your eyes.
"Your funeral." You said, before removing the sweatshirt. The soft breeze felt wonderful on your skin, and Ludwig's breath hitched when he saw the scar.
"Did you do zhat?" He asked, and you shook your head.
"No."
"Who di-"
"My m-mom." You whispered, and he is jaw dropped.
"You are staying at my house tonight." He said, and you looked at him.
"Bu-"
"No buts. You cannot go home to an abusive mother."
"I'll just have to borrow your clothes then." You said, smirking.
"Ah. Vell. I suppose so... I'm not letting you worm out of this." He cleared his breath awkwardly.
And thus began a great friendship. You got along pretty well with Feli and Kiku, so you supposed that was allright. Feli absolutely adored you, and he would always talk to you when you were down. Ludwig called the police on your mother, and you ended up with Ludwig and his brother permanently. Gilbert stopped bullying you for the most part, now seeing you as his younger sister. No one else stopped though. If anything they got even more violent.
One night, walking home from your part time job, you got cornered by some classmates in an alley. They beat you, and cut you, then left you there to crawl home. You made it back to the house quickly, ignoring Gilbert as you rushed upstairs to your room- what used to be the guest room, and collapsing on the bed.
When Ludwig got home, after hearing what his brother had to say, he went straight to your room to make sure you were all right. When he saw the state of your arms and legs, he suspected the worst, looking at your unmoving body.
"________!" He shouted, and you woke.
"What happened?!" He asked, and you sighed, explaining what had happened. Ludwig cursed.
"I will kill them." He said, before grabbing your shoulders.
"You are perfect." He said, and you sighed.
"Ludwig-"
"I love you." He blurted out, instantly, blushing, his blue eyes wide with shock at what he just said.
"Ludwig-"
"Mein gott. I'm so sorry, I shouldn't have said that."
"Ludwig-"
"Nein, I'm so sorry!"
"Ludwig-"
"I'm just going to-
"LUDWIG. I love you too." You finally interrupted him, and he froze, before smiling and leaning down to kiss your cheek.
"You are perfect."
OHMIGOD. FUCKING WRITERSBLOCK. This was so hard to write. I'm stuck in a fucking hole. I hate writersblock. I will get back to writing, but until then, please be patient with me.
I don't own Hetalia,
You (c) :iconsexygermanyplz:
Edit:
GUYS THIS HAS A LOT OF FAVORITES :D THANK YOU!!!!! <3333
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PiplupAdventures Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  New member Student General Artist
I LOVE THIS!
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xXBullet3TearsXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
Aw that is so sweet :3 (and so unrealistic - at least for me. I'm the furthest thing from perfect EVER haha)
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"Ludwig-"
"I love you." He blurted out, instantly, blushing, his blue eyes wide with shock at what he just said.
"Ludwig-"
"Mein gott. I'm so sorry, I shouldn't have said that."
"Ludwig-"
"Nein, I'm so sorry!"
"Ludwig-"
"I'm just going to-
"I swear to God shut the ебать up and let me speak you осел!"
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nishe
luved it
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DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*silently murders classmates in imagination*
They will die soon, eh?
Germany: Canada, you little sister is very scary...
Canada: That's my maple.
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Bunnylover811 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  New member Professional Artist
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student Filmographer
OMG,NEIN LET ME FINISH
Dis story was so kawai ^J^!
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:icongothfoxgirl:
Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
-deeeeeeeeeep breath- -long and loud squeal-
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:iconkieikoairya:
KieikoAirya Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Airborne  
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:iconprussiaskitten:
PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MEIN GOTT!!!! Luddy~ let me talk okay! verdammt!!!
love this fic!!!!
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Moymashed Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Loved. It
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:iconlittleatlantis:
LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
:D Germany's Plan [V5] Hetalia Germany spinning NO NEIN Icon APH Germany Blushing Germany (Argues) [V4] 
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charleywren3 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Germany copyrighted me...? 


((Not that I'm complaining, I mean...))
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Germany : You are perfect.
Reader-chan : Ludwig-
Germany : I love you
Reader-chan : Ludwig
Germany : Mein gott. I'm sorry, I shouldn't have said that.
Reader-chan : Ludwig-
Germany : I'm just going to-
Me : VERDAMMT LUDWIG!!!!!!! LET ME FINISH SPEAKING SO I CAN SAY ICH LIEBE DICH AUCH!!!
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DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Writer
Nice...
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Thanks. Its actually nice to be part German so I can speak (a little) German.
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:iconhetalialover20:
HetaliaLover20 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Me too!!!!!!! 
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
Really? YAY!!!!
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:icondragoshadowing:
DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah, my like great grandmum lived in Germany for a bit, so I picked up a few words (or sentences)
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
My grand father is actully German. So we are kinda the same.
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:icondragoshadowing:
DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Writer
woah...
(just newly discovered long forgotten relationship connection)
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
O_O.....(conecting).......*conection made*........Wow just wow.
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:icondragoshadowing:
DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Writer
OH MY GOD!!! *glomp*
(why? just cuz i wanted to)
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otakudreams139 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
I officially need to watch more Hetalia=(......This was a cute fanfic
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Supreeeeeeeemee Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Ludwig-
Germany:I love you
Ludwig-
Germany:Mein gott I'm sorry
Ludwig-
Germany:Nein
Ludwig-
Germany: I'm just going to-
"FUCKING LET ME SPEAK, DAMN YOU, I WANTED TO SAY ICH LIEBE DICH AUCH IDIOT."
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kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Ludwig, you son of a bitch, let me cycling speak, goddammit!
Ludwig: Are you Lovino's sister?
Nooooooooo. I'm Japan's.
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nyanmeowth Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Artist
Lemme finish my damn sentaces ludiwg!!!
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I-am-a-true-Chibi Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
"Ludwig-
Germany:I love you
Ludwig-
Germany:Mein gott I'm sorry
Ludwig-
Germany:Nein
Ludwig-
Germany: I'm just going to-
real me: LUDDY,STOP FUCKING INTERUPTING ME,GOD DAMNIT"
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12popscotch Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I literally just did that and every word was EXACTLY THE SAME
Sherlock Thinking - Mind Palace
:spinplz: 
hmm ....

we clearly have psychic ability's.
its the only possible explanation.
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I-am-a-true-Chibi Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Writer
clearly •3•
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AlfredJones13 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Super fluffeh~
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xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I LOVE THIS!!!! ASGFKAGEKSBSJSNDDIDBDIXNSONSDKSBSSBS *fangirl squeal* I LUV YOU LUDDY!!!
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xX1HetaliaLuver1Xx Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A guy just moved in next door and he looks and acts just like him. I'm spazzing rn.
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quelquely Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Aaah!! Lucky. Now if I only I could get a shy Japanese boy who loves personal space to move in next to me...
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xX1HetaliaLuver1Xx Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That'd be amazing O.O
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:iconxx1hetalialuver1xx:
xX1HetaliaLuver1Xx Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would've been like
"Silly! You missed!" Then kissed him.
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Stormcloudthegreat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the story! But I have but one thing to say, if someone tried to beat me up, if they were a boy, they would lose the ability to reproduce (as in I would stab them in between the legs)
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AkiraWolf12 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
I did that when my friend tried to take my Manga. He wanted to look at it but it was brand new, so I kicked him where the sun don't shine!
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Fortheloveofchaos Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so...so...GOOD!!!!
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AllenSt0n3123 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Interface Designer
:iconludwigplz: this is just a cute story! :D
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XxAmuFujibioshixX Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student
Things escalated quickly o.o But I can understand because of your writers block XP It's pretty good for you having writers block, I have to say! :D Nice work!
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MyArmyOfPeeps Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Hahaha I wrote this a while back *scratches back of head awkwardly* it's not really my best work :)
But I'm glad you like it.
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XxAmuFujibioshixX Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student
^-^
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Eyeleeana Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
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PunkEmoMetal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Photographer
:germanycuteplz: SO DAMN CUTE MY NOSE and EARS and EYES ARE BLEEDiNG! GERRRMMMAAANNNYYYY
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icongermanycuteplz:
Well atleast you are not dead because of blood loss :icondeadplz:
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PunkEmoMetal Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Photographer
I don't knowwww
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GreenEyedOkami Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww! :icongermanyblushplz:
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
.kjanhcfjh DJVhsdhv
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Reapershewolf Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Sweet story, wish PART of that was my life, my parenta are good and I got good friends but the strange, freak, and emo part... Yeah. Sweet story. :D
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